In the
Washington Post article by Charles Lane, “Drug Legalization Claims are Cloudy,”
http://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/charles-lane-drug-legalization-claims-are-cloudy/2014/02/19/fd577128-98cf-11e3-b931-0204122c514b_story.html
Charles makes a claim towards middle aged voting adults. Lane proves his
credibility by providing quotes and statistics from: “Radley Balko, former
congressman Barney Frank, drug-policy expert Keith Humphreys, Justice
Department Statistics, and Philip Seymour Hoffman’s death” (legalization). Charles
Lane makes the claim against the war on drugs saying that it’s “a costly flop”
and providing statistics that drug use, crime, drug arrest rates are on the
decline except for a pharmaceutical drug, Opioid, and marijuana which is
rising. Lane never fully states his opinion on how to go about fixing the drug
problem by avoiding the question.
The author
doesn’t have the information to be able to say what the world would be like if
drugs had been legal for the last decade. Instead of making a case based on his
statistics and data he just skips over it and jumps to his next topic. I agree
with Charles Lane when he discusses the fact that pharmaceutical drugs are on
the rise. Overall the author makes a fair claim until he says that “if the goal
of the war on drugs is to limit demand for drugs, then you can’t say the
authorities are losing.” In the next paragraph he talks about how certain drugs
have fewer drug users, deaths, and violent crime than in 1991 and 2011. Is this
because of the war on drugs or because people are choosing more wisely, there
are a number of factors that are not discussed that could be the reason why
drug use is on the decline.
Using credible
sources like the author does proves his credibility and makes him reliable. As
for his opinion and logic it makes his argument fall apart.